My name is Mauricio Carreño. I´m 16 years old, I´m single, study in sagrado corazon school in the 11 grade.
I was burn in Argentina(Bueno Aires), but my family wasn´t , my family is colombian , then for 12 year I live in Barraquilla. I´m friendly, outgoing, lazy person :D..... I have 2 brother and any sister.
I begin in San Francisco school until 5 grade then righ now I study in sagrado corazon school, I practiced beisball, basketball, soccer, tennis, and other deport, but actually I loves basketball and dance, i like to listen all music, beacuse each one shows a way to express ideas.
my father is my model to follow, He is doctor, specialized in pediatria, grastroenterologo, hepatologo, neonatologo, intensivista, and He like to play soccer.
my mother is homemaker, and She like to decorate the house.
my brothers live in argentina, the first is ingineer, and the othr is a student because He studying his speciality.
now I tell them just that little ahead of my family and me, after i will talk more about my life and my experience of every day.....
now I tell you about my childhood...
Well ...when I was a child just thinking about playing with my friends, never thought about work or anything like that, I loved playing football, and all hard until college, since gaining a responsibility ...
speaking of school, I remember my first day of class, as it was still very young I didn´t like away from my breast, full and felt bad, but when I was with my new colleagues and we started playing, I found something super cool because it was fun, learning and sharing moments with new people. Ultimately my childhood was good, because I had many emotions, activities, and I think this helped me to be what I am now ...
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Hi Mauricio.
I found some mistakes in your composition. "I'm a single is not correct". You should say: "I'm single".
I begin in san francisco is not correct. You must say: "I began in San Francisco".
I'm 16 year old is not correct. You should say: I'm 16 years old".
Well...
Thank for your comment laura.... :D
Hey Mau, your video is great. However, there are some words in your post that require capitalization. You could have used capitals in the initial letters of my name. Anyway, congratulations on your blog. It's really good.
Hi Mauricio! Your blog is good, however it has some mistakes. In several words you should have used capital letters instead of small letters. Also you wrote badly some words and sentences, for example: Esperencie, beisball, beacuse, ingineer, othr, righ, strart, wen…
- I was burn in Argentina / I was born in Argentina.
- I have 2 brother and any sister / I have 2 brothers and one sister.
- I begin in San Francisco school until 5 grade then righ now I study in sagrado corazon school / I began (or “I studied”) in San Francisco School until 5 grade. Nowadays I study at Sagrado Corazón School.
- soccer, tennis, and other deport / soccer, tennis, and others sports.
- I loves basketball / I love basketball.
- pediatria, grastroenterologo, hepatologo, neonatologo, intensivista / You can write it in English: pediatrics, gastroenterologist, hepatologist, neonatologist, intensivist.
- He like to play soccer / He likes to play soccer.
- She like to decorate / She likes to decorate.
- I remember my first day of class, as it was still very young I didn´t like away from my breast, full and felt bad / I think you can say it: “I remember my first day of class, I was a child and I didn´t like to be away from my family, I felt badly”.
- but depent the conversation / but it depends on the conversation.
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